lumin-ant
2:42 p.m. - Wednesday, Jun. 16, 2004
the sky is the limit
Love at first sight: Open and layout. Clouds. White. Lots of white. Simple. Very simple. But I actually like it. I just like the cloud theme.
Layout:
RANT: Some of your links open in a new page. I do not like. Your bio is okay. But it could be improved. It should be more like: "I'm Jessica, a 13 year old soon to be freshman. I live in Texas and I am *insert important belief.* Like yeah. Scroll bar is too white. No title on arcives page and time/date's at hte bottom of regular pages. Too many spaces on the main page. It's like title paragraph, entry paragraph, date paragraph, comment ... well you get the idea.
RAVE: The clouds. I absolutely love them. The links are blue. Very nice. It's simple but it looks really nice.
Score 24/30
Random entry comments:
5. List your five favorite computer and/or game system games.
The Sims, Spyro, Petz, Tony Hawk, Roller Coaster Tycoon
I love, love, love Spyro. Extra point.
Your reviews page is in alpa order. I love it. Momma views. No! Bad experince (see shame) ... anyways.
17. Favourite movies: Lord of the Rings 1/2 ... No, LOTR = BAD. Minus one point.
40. In the car AC or open windows: open windows. Open windows bad. Another point.
50. Favourite quote: There can be no triumph without loss, no victory without suffering, and no freedom without sacrfice. Quote good. Add a point.
"I know I'm beautiful but am I pretty?" That makes NO sense man. You are a little concieted. I can respect that. Unless you take it too far.
Boogie down ... onward to the profile:
Liz Phair, Linkin Park, Nickleback ... nice ... marcaste un tanto
Yeah. I do
that to.
Me
too. Only I doubt you really loved him. But I won't take your score down because I'm feeling nice.
"The only love you have is the love to hate." ...
Another quote that makes very little sense. I think I hate love. The concept. The abuse. Who knows, I may be wrong? I do think I hate my love to hate though.
I love
Pandora. POINT!
I am so addicted too.
I love/hate you points: TWO! ... exciting stuff
Content: Time for the ACTUAL review.
So I like many entries. Like
this one. It was thoughtful and insightful. As was
this entry. That's VERY deep for a 13 year old. And I'm only 14.
You write well. Very, very well. You just seem very boy oriented. It's just like
two months is not enough time for a *real* relationship. I understand that you are an eight grader. So relationship is very different from when you get into high school. But you can't love someone in two months. And yeah ... I feel strongly about that.
I feel like a hypocrite saying this ... but you can't help what
you feel. Another well done entry by the way. The only thing I can find I don't like is what your saying on rare occasions. But the way you say it is wonderful. Eloquent. Beautiful and cohearent. And well, you are just a damn good writer. I can only imagine how you will get better as you get older and your style develops even more. You aren't perfect. You have fluid writing, but ever so often it's jumpy. There is no unifying theme throughout your diary. BUT, that is alright. You do hide from what you feel and you think about love a lot. Which I can totally understand. All your entries are reasable ... but I detected one or two I didn't.
But you are a FABULOUS writer.
Content Score: 66/70
total: 92/100 ... woah that is like high
Quote for you: You are what you love, not what loves you. - Adaptation
Reviewed by: Crystal ... I finally changed the quote on *this* layout.
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