First thing I noticed upon entering this page is, of course, the bright neon pink. Dear goddess I hate this color. I must admit that contrasted with the black it's a nice effect, but it's still insanely pink. The links are to either side, which isn't too bad, kinda cluttered. Old Like Whoa? Mm-hmm. For a table design, it's not too bad. Much less cluttered than some I've seen.
Dunno why I said that but I did, obvi. That sentence needs to die a slow and painful death. You write like that a lot. And wow, it's really annoying. It's giving me a headache...like whoa. Everytime I read the word whoa in your entries it makes me think of The Matrix. And I hated that movie. This is bad.
This entry rocked. You got your emotions flowing in it, and it was really nice to read how you were feeling. It would be awesome if more entries were like this. There are a lot that are good and full of emotion, but for the most part, they cover what happened during the day. Too many of them are "Don't feel like updating, so la la la..."
Awwww heeeeeelllllll. Diaryland just SCREWED UP, and now I'm getting that STUPID "Please hit reload" message. GRR! I'll finish your review later. After I go hit someone.
Okay. Final summation. I now have a permanent ::twitch:: from all the 'like whoa's' in your diary, and will never be able to say whoa again in my life. My eyes hurt from the pink, and the spelling errors and slang. Writing has potential, a few really great entries, but for the most part, not that great a read.
::nod nod::
And there you have it.
~Hannah