hopeless17
10:15 p.m. - Thursday, Jun. 17, 2004
if you were here, I'd scream this song in your face
Username/title: you're hopless I'm guessing. And you either are or like 17. Not too confusing. I don't particularly liek number sn's though. The title is odd. I like it because it's creative and different. But what song would you be screaming in my face? Too ambiguous.
Layout: Well there's black and red and white and MORE BLACK! I get that you're a guy so you don't want an pink or purple temp, but this one is so gothesce. I hate the red on black thing. It's like why not just have a picture of a bloody hand? Not that you should. It would be all intense and stuff. Your template doesn't need to scream "I am NOT a girl." The terrible colors aside I don't like how you have the three boxes. I don't know why it just bothers me. And the green frozed kiss think is all in my face ... FLASHING about and provoking seizures. And then you have like eight million liks and they all have #. I no likey. Extras page! You must have one! And then I can't see where I am on page cause the scroll bar is all black. So much black. You need another color or a picture os something.
The only two things I like about your layout is that it's readable and the links aren't underlined.
Layout Score: 16/30 ... for not being dland and not ruining it.
Random Comments:
Your
100 things is linked on the main page as about me. Which I don't get. And it's not a real 100 things cause you don't come up with stuff yourself you just answer questions. Rather badly if I must say so.
You like South Park. Good. Man Show. Bad. Liar Liar and Austin Powers. Good. Big Daddy, Water Boy. Bad. Scary Movie 1 & 3 are good. two was just crap... Menos uno.
"17. Who would you like to marry? Angelina Jolie"
She doesn't creep you out. I mean she made out with HER BROTHER and she married Billy Bob. I know she's hot and talented but she is a freaky mofo. ... I do not like your 100 things. Your answers were so ... annoying and unaswerish.
Pro:
"When someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles to frown about it but it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and punch the shit out of them." ... I like that.
But I don't like your quotes page.
OKAY. I will only say this once.
DOUBLE STANDARD. So, I personally don't find guys making out hot, but guys find two girls making out hot. So ... yeah. I don't care that you said it. And VH1 sucks, cept for Illustratred, Super Secret and the "I love the w/e's"
Oh god ... no capitalization. And you make none of your friends sound like good people. I already dislike them.
Hate/Love: Let's skip to the part where I say I dislike you. minus 3
Content:
The truth is coming out. You
broke your bed. The entry two before that was about how you ripped out your lip ring. You hate
your job. You talked to a guy, worried baout looking gay. Didn't update for a month, saw your therapast. Have a crush on her, didn't update for a month again after that.
Yes. This is a DAYLOG! With a lack of capitalization. No emotion and long run on entries. I honestly don't know how good they became, because half way through I gave up. You have no capitalization and your paragraphs are so damn long ... it's hard to read. It seems some of your entries have a bit of emotion in the second half. So can the first part and focus on that. How do you feel? Don't say what you did say how it affected you. If you catch my drift. It's hard to give advice on how to improve since you do daylog. And that can only be so good. It's good when your daylogging is novelesce with colorful language. But it's crap without emotion and insight. So ... stop daylogging and stuff.
Content Score: 30/70
Total: 43/100
Reviewed by:
Crystal
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