Dull Star
11:10 a.m. - Sunday, Sept. 19, 2004
And it goes a little something like this ....
Okay. It's been like two months since I started your review. But, yeah, my computer froze twice when I was almost done. & So, yeah. Anyways. Thanks for being patient.
Layout: I pretty much love it. My only complaints are the scrool bar, the underlined links, and that stupid p think you put in fromt of them. Yeah, and your "catch up" doesn't really say anything. It really makes me, not want to read. But the image is nice. For the most part, the colors work. Not too shabby.
Score: 26/30
Content: Yes. Well. Um. Yeah. What to say. You, daylogg. You may or may not be acutely aware of this, but you do daylogg and daylogging is boring. Before I or instead of trashing daylogging, I'll say you daylogg well. As well as one can daylogg. You manage to talk about what happened. But if I peruse your entries I find tidbits of humor and emotion. Of course, they don't quite stand out.
I'm midly amused when I read. Of course, if you entries were shorter I'd be signifigantly ore amused. You tend to take everything you've been thinking and shove it into one uber lone entry. So, you do have (dare I say such a cliche thing) potential. I think you enjoy the way you write and the way it makes you sound. And I think you will continue writing in such a way. So, my only suggestion is to cut out some of that excess stuff in your entries.
Scrore: 52/70
TOTAL: 78/100
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