allikatt4269
3:49 p.m. - Wednesday, Jul. 14, 2004

WEEEE!

Ah! Red & white, and big font. *Faints*

Layout: Now that I've recovered from that origional shock. Okay, that's a lie. I've attempted to review you a few times, but the layout threw me off. I only have two, erm three complaints. One: the font. It appears you use the font size = 2 thing, instead of the font: 9pt tahoma or whatever font you like. My second complaint is the links. Why are they falling? I like my links left to right, not up to down. The active link isn't the same as the hover link. That bothers me. And then the scroll bar. I don't like. Oh yeah, and there's too much bold caps. I like the background pic, but that other pic is way random. And then you have 8 million pics of yourself. How nice.
Score: 19/30

Like to hate you: Rings. Mice: Adult swim, athf, anti-bush, eds, evanescence (though I'm sick of their damn songs on every freaking commercial), fantasy, fishnets, goo goo dolls, halloween, hot topic, ketchup, mad tv, normal sucks, oddparents, south park. Long list. Only one I don't like is Scooby Doo. So far I like you, a lot.
Score: So yeah, I like you +5

Content: Damn, now I have to start reading. You liked Harry Potter. Ew. I'll let it go. I like your story. "I don't type more entries because I talk about the same thing in every one. I don't have anything else to really say." You said it. All your entries are for your boyfriend. They're about how you miss him, and you wish you were with him. *Cue eye roll* Boring. The entries that aren't about how you miss your boyfriend are boring dayloggs. I want to scream. Loudly.

My advice. Stopdaylogging and focus more on emotions. You could write more stories. I liked the story. It was nice. You could continue writting about nothing besides how you miss your boyfriend. IF you vary it a little.
Score: 45/70

Total: 70/100
Reviewed by: Crystal

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