I love your title with a firery passion. It's definetly the best part of your layout.
First Impression: You’re diary-x; and I like diaryland. I was a bit disappointed at first, but then I thought; it doesn’t matter. But you can’t leave notes this way. What a shame. I hate this template. I’ve seen it before at a few places. What is with the girl; what is on her back? I can barely make out the links. And although small, the writing is easy to read. I like the bright orange against black. Luckily it doesn’t come off as too Halloween. I like your layout, except for the girl, I’m not “feeling” the picture. It’s a decent match for you, but you could do better. The first entry I chose to read, was this one. And it was about sex, how scandalous. Being a virgin, I feared that I wouldn’t be able to relate to you.
So far I’ve read a few entries. You’re writing seems good, thus far. You say "lol" way, way, too much. I like the quote at the beginning of the entry. And you sign at the end of all your entries, which is strange. I can’t decide if I like it or hate it.
Impeccable spelling and grammar.
I’m about halfway done reading. I like your writing but it’s almost all about Garrete. You sound like you love him so much. Your other entries are about how you hate your parents and how horrible you are, more or less. Shoplifting doesn’t make you a selfish bitch, being a selfish bitch makes you one. I don’t like the random bold and italics either. I don’t think the words need to be brought out. I loved that episode of South Park. It, like so many of the other’s satires a various aspect of life. But, I won’t go English teacher on you. Much of your diary is day logging, but with emotion. You say what happened and how you felt. It actually works for me, though some of your entries aren’t exactly tantalizing. At times my eyes were glued to the page, but that was just because of drama, or things that don’t happen to me, not because your writing is excellent. You aren’t a bad writer, you’re pretty good, actually. I’d just suggest less about what happened during your day, and more about what you feel. I can get a pretty good deal of emotion out of your diary, but it’s not an "“I felt like this" way. Your words have emotion, but they aren’t dripping in it. Your diary is one I’ll return to on occasion, but not one I’ll read religiously.
Extras: You have quite a few quizzes and other similar things. They are all pretty much the same, but with a few differences. Some questions are incredibly stupid. You think size nine feet are huge, I’m a size eleven. I’m six inches taller than you, but my feet are still more hugemungous. The cast page is quite long, so if I really wanted to know who everyone was, I’d have a good reference. I’m stealing several of your surveys.
Contact: Guestbook, email, not too impressive
Favorite quote(s):
"Even with all of the words that came escaped our lips, I don't think anything was really said."
Your writing could improve, but it’s good where it is.
Total: 81/100